Pearls Poem by Adryan Barnathan

Pearls

Rating: 5.0


One more pearl
drops
from your lips
descending down
the string, it clicks
against a row of
pearl on pearl,
and grows a precious
strand of you.


Copyright ©2005

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Darbyshire 14 November 2005

Nice Adrienne, I like pearls, do they like you? have a nice day dave xxx

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Herbert Nehrlich1 12 November 2005

I love it. Suggestion: Could you put 'drops' (in the first line) as a stand on its own word in the second line? Best H

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