One In Love Poem by Loyd C Taylor Sr

One In Love

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One in life, one in living;
One in getting, one in giving.

One in sorrow, one in laughter;
One in the present, one hereafter.

One in partnership, one in sharing;
One in helping, one in bearing.

One in sickness, one in health;
One in poverty, one in wealth.

One in distance, one in closeness;
One in sadness, one in happiness.

One in Trust.
One in Hope.
One in Dreams.
One in Faith.
One in Joy.
One in Destiny.

One in Love!

“Therefore shall a man leave his father and his mother,
and shall cleave unto his wife: and they shall be one flesh.” Genesis 2: 24

Tuesday, May 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: marriage
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
These are some words I repeat to a couple after I have finished performing their marriage. I remind them that what they commit that day will need to be recommitted every day for the rest of their lives. I hope you enjoy, Loyd
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 13 May 2014

I enjoyed the message in your poem. The repetitive use of One in... got to me, distracted from the essence of the poem. Not sure how else you could do it, except maybe consolidate some of the words of two lines at once. Otherwise really good. RoseAnn

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Lorraine Colon 13 May 2014

Loving someone involves a lot of things, doesn't it. One great poem!

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