No One Poem by Mia Ocean

No One

Rating: 5.0


When the sun used to shine
through the blinds,
it would have pattern,
and the pattern would have shape,
and the shape would have meaning.

No one, no one,
payed attention to the shape.
So the sun no longer shines
through those blinds,
and no one knows the message.

But they know it was a warning.
No one knows.
Why?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tori Ocean 27 November 2006

not bad.

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Lydia Francese 11 May 2006

Why? is a good way to end this poem, because it keeps the reader thinking avout the warning. A good read. -Lydia

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Moya Levy 21 April 2006

I like your style in this poem Mia, I like the way you see the detail. Moyaxxx

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