Mystified Poem by Lycko Chizo

Mystified

Rating: 4.8


She's lying on her bed
The only one that I call my everything
She's my strength
Yet she's also my weakness
For without her I can't live
Without her I am weak
But what is this?
I hear demonic voices on my head
Then suddenly my heart begun to change
There's no more love
There's nothing left
Nothing but vengeance and hatred
So I hold the knife
I realize my grip was too tight
Then I move closer to her
But she's still on her deep sleep
Unaware that her life is about to be ended
Then I push the knife deep through her heart
She was shocked, she cried
Blood painted her like an art
Then her breath weakened
Until it finally stop
Then suddenly begun to realize what I have done?
I just killed my love - my only one
So I shout out loud
Wanted to end my life too
Then she woke me up with a grin
And told me 'What have you dreamed? '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
shueyb boyer 25 July 2009

i love it well done it sound like an actual event the way u put it together until u reach the end i like ur style its kinda simelar to mine

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success