Missing You Poem by sancheir lewis

Missing You

Rating: 4.5


missing you is one of the hardest things to do
my heart feels incomplete
the sky becomes dark
and i lose all of my spark
i go crazy with out you by my side
i feel like akon 'locked up'
i feel like i am crying but there is no tears
all of my tars some how disappear
i am just not my self when you aint around.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angela Hansard 04 September 2005

You are a young poet and a good one at that. Keep up the good work. Always remember Jesus loves youand God does to. Also God answers prayers.

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Lylyanna Pilewski 20 July 2005

so awesome it's really just the best experience to read your poems. Lylyanna

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A. B. 16 June 2005

you are young yet a very good poet. I liked the line 'I feel like akon 'locked up'. Way to go girl. i give you 10.

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shehla carol 15 June 2005

hi i read ur all poems and they were wonderful.simple in words and good in meaning.expressing emotions in words which u have done in simple language is really appreciative.u will definitely become a successful poet. KEEP IT UP

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