Lonely Poem by Sandra Osborne

Lonely

Rating: 3.0


Lonely.
How to describe it?

Maybe a leaf on a snow covered field,
Maybe a log in the middle of a lake,
Maybe a snow flake in the middle of June,
Maybe a tree in a crater on the moon,
Maybe a canoe in the middle of a forest,
Maybe a star in the middle of the day,
Or maybe me, in the middle of you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rich Hanson 14 January 2005

The last line didn't work for me at first, but the more I thought about it, the more it seems to. You can become engulfed by someone, swallowed up by their more dominant personality, and still feel alone.

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Allan James Saywell 14 January 2005

I seek my own company For i have become A joy to myself Allan james saywell

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