Light Up Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

A deep thought through simple and efficient words. A lovely poem! 10

Thought provoking and tantalising. The economical style is really appealing.

What wonderful advice.Light was the first thing God spoke into existence. in time, it will overcome darkness.10, for your wise thoughts. Warmest regards, Sandra

this wonderful piece is so true. EVERYBODY makes mistakes by mistake as you said yourself..it was very good, short but really good. ~Hazel G.E

Light up Above the raging volcano Of your thought -------- that was really wonderful. i really love this part thats really great. thanks for letting me have this nice poem.10

short and honest, i loved it :)

just the truth. well done. short but acutely penned.10.

An opinion poetically expressed

Stong sentiments, Thought provoking..............................

a nice thought provoking verses with a touched of the great prophets...biblical point of view implied to reality.......10