Let Me Go Poem by lala rain

Let Me Go

Rating: 5.0


when your soul is lost
and it cries out for help
if no one tries to save you
do they still care

and if you cry a thousand tears
and are drowning in your sorrow
and no one notices
are you still there

and if i decided not to stay
but to leave this place
if i tried to run
would you stop me

would you let me go
would you chase me
to the ends of the earth
would you find me

and if at your last touch i
shattered like glass
would you stay
to pick up the pieces

and if i was gone would
would you forget me
and would you try to
iron me awat with the creases

will you ever let me go.............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nimal Dunuhinga 20 August 2006

Beautiful. Lala when let go the attachments the soul will be more free?

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Beautifully written. You threw me a bit at the end with the twist but it was a good effect. Esra Sloblock

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Scarlet Red 14 August 2006

by the way the poem goes, it is you who doesnt want to let go of him... anyways, nice piece here.. goodluck on your lovelife =)

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