It Was Love Poem by Brooke Luchich

It Was Love

Rating: 5.0


If I could re-write a brand new ending to our same old story then I would,
I’d start at the beginning and relive each and every chapter if I could.
I still love you, I always have, I always will and I just wanted you to know,
Something in your smile makes me think I wasn’t the only one not ready to let go.
I have held back everything I’ve wanted to say and now it’s time to make it clear,
I miss you and it’s like I’ve lost the best part of me since you haven’t been here.
I’ll never forget all the sweet things you said and I still listen to our song,
You will always be my favourite hand to hold no matter who else comes along.
When I was sad you could always make me smile and now it’s not the same,
I don’t feel like being happy anymore and for that I’ll admit it’s you I blame.
I’d never cared for relationships but that all changed the day that we met,
I got butterflies when I heard your name and your smile I could never forget.
The best feeling was when you held me it was like all my dreams had come true,
And I know that I’ll never fall in love like that again, the way I did with you.
Everyone said it wouldn’t last but when we were together we never cared,
And I know I could never bring myself to regret what you and I once shared.
Sometimes you have the right person and it’s just the timing that’s wrong,
It’s like finding your soul mate and realising they were there all along.
Maybe it’s like that with me and you and we’re meant to figure it all out,
Whatever the outcome I know what I want and it’s something I’ll never doubt.
From the very start I had my mind made up that what we had was there to stay,
It was love and although we’re no longer together, the feelings will never go away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hailey Agnew 16 July 2009

i know exactly how that feels, love your writing,10

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Chitra - 15 July 2009

a heart stirring write...beautifully expressed

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Makayla Straight 13 July 2009

know how that feels...Good writing

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jessica lee gregory 07 July 2009

wow hun, you are a great writter. for to sit here and read this peom andhave it bring tears to my eyes that is something special. that i what love is. i thought i was inlove with this guy but then i found out he cheated on me with my best friend. now i have found love. i have found happiness and i thank him so much for showing me what love actually is. you are fantastic. keep writing hun

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Ahtivah Lawton 02 July 2009

wow....ur xplaining my whole situation now...please read my poem called Off My Buddy List..this poem was beautifully written...luuv it!

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