I Got It Bad Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

I Got It Bad

Rating: 5.0


I heated my tea twice

went upstairs and came down
only once though...

stood and watched the laundry spin

held the dish-brush, and put it back
yeah, that was a mistake...

smoked a cigarette,
and wrote a poem

you're right
I got it bad.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
fanniesson - 11 December 2006

To say it in such few words is beautiful. An enjoyable read for me

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Ernestine Northover 13 January 2006

How about taking a couple of paracetamol tablets, Eila, they are said to calm down any inflammation whether it be in the brain or the braun. They might even help with 'inspiration' you never know. Good thinking. Love Ernestine XXX

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Declan McHenry 13 January 2006

An enigmatic write Eila, I'm having to guess at what you've got. Ilike that!

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