Hungry For You Poem by Rini Shibu

Hungry For You

Rating: 5.0


Loving  and caring
Yes you are my  darling
You are so sweet
To increase my heat
You keep me hungry
And just feed little honey
You are radiant
And crisp like  snow
Gives me Chills
when you are close
Melts and Vanish when I hold
You are cool and vibrant
And pour invisible tender love
To crave for you more and more

Sunday, September 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,love,passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 13 September 2017

This is the best kind of passion, because it is self-renewing. It doesn't get stale and routine, which can be the death of love. This renewal is proof or love because you and your partner don't take each for granted. Rumi wrote CULTIVATE YOUR THIRST, which is analogous to your HUNGRY FOR YOU, the dynamics of love are the same whether it is a spiritual or a secular love. L-O-V-E is so much bigger than we humans, and your poem celebrates a portion of that immensity with sincerity.

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Rini Shibu 14 September 2017

Thank you so much Daniel your lovely comments.. Rini

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Saravanan Sivasubramanian 11 September 2017

Dear poet, This poem shows the in depth of love. penned by you well and good as usual

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Rini Shibu 11 September 2017

Thanks Siva for reading this poem Rini

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Viju J 11 September 2017

passionate one expressive of emotions

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Rini Shibu 11 September 2017

Thank you for the comments viju... Rini

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Lamar Cole 10 September 2017

Very wonderful love poem filled with passion.

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Rini Shibu 10 September 2017

Thanks for your lovely comments Lam.. Rini

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Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 10 September 2017

Absolutely Fab Rini Mario Odekerken

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Rini Shibu 10 September 2017

Thanks Mario.. Rini

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