Heaven And Hell Poem by Bridgid Patrick

Heaven And Hell

Rating: 5.0


Hell is other people's minds,
their thoughts to wander in..

Purgatory is our own
to ponder on our sins.

Heaven is that state attained
beyond the reach of mind,

Where innocence has been regained,
and love is undefined.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 April 2008

this piece has made me appreciating life even better......hey thanks bridgid

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Original Unknown Girl 18 February 2008

Superb! I read this in the forum and had to come here to add my comments. Such perfection in it's brevity. HG: -) xx

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Patrick Ladbrooke 26 October 2006

Simple, not a word wasted and great definitions. Patrick

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John Tiong Chunghoo 19 October 2006

dear bridgid, i love clever little lines like these. good to enjoy. sincerely, john.

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A. B. 19 October 2006

Loved this one. Peace.

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