Heaven Poem by Lara W.A

Heaven

Rating: 4.5


Don’t leave, Heaven
Don’t go, Sanity
Please stay
I want to live
One more day

People are laughing
I’m trying not to wonder
What makes the world go round?

Pride – Don’t walk out on me
You’re the only one thing
I have left.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mimi Fakhira 20 June 2009

Brilliant in every way! Write more...

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Peter A. Crowther 28 June 2005

Yes, I liked that last stanza, too. It is a really good, neat ending to the poem.

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Ivy Christou 24 June 2005

Wow! the last paragraph was perfectly penned! well done! ! HBH

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Linda Hepner 23 June 2005

Pride isn't the only thing left in your life! Submit to Nature! You have all sorts of unexpected and glorious things ahead, with or without Heaven and with or without understanding what makes the world tick! Go with it and write more!

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Lara W.A

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