Goddess Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Goddess

Rating: 4.6


Goddess
Of my fragile dreams,
I’ll run my fingers
Through your hair.

I’ll kiss you
Slowly in the shower
Until there is nothing but love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 17 January 2006

Hmm....somebody's in a great mood! Very nice Uriah! You do have a way of creating a mood with your poems. Sincerely, Mary

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Declan McHenry 17 January 2006

Uriah, an evocative piece. The title drew me in and I was not sure what to expect. This is a short departure from your usual style. Nevertheless it is delivered with more than enough aplomb. Excellent. Truly evocative.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 17 January 2006

Very sweet and sensual....

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Shannon Chapel 29 January 2006

Um...can somebody please pass the squeegee? It's gettin' a bit steamy in here. Shannon

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Ivy Christou 18 January 2006

short, simple and sensual! I liked the fact that it is unfinished.. it leaves a lot to the reader's imagination doesn't it? ! HBH

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Joy Vanderhelm 17 January 2006

This does present a certain mood and feeling. Very provacative.

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Raynette Eitel 17 January 2006

This is concise and very focused, Uriah. Beautiful image. Raynette

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Damn! Is it getting hot in here?

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