Forever Blind Poem by Harold D. Cecil

Forever Blind

Rating: 5.0


If you desire sun
In the burning night
You will unleash
a most terrible sight

close your eyes...

The vermiculite sky
Will gladly fade
showing all that
the Gods forbade

close your eyes...

The terror you see
will penetrate your mind
leaving you,
forever blind

Close your eyes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Viola Grey 02 November 2008

this one is quite a treat....there is a sense of foreboding lying underneath...and it's great

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<font color=black>Nagourta 19 September 2008

Lovely rhyme scheme, oh my GOD it was a beaut! This reflects an inner journey defying the gods and societies of this world, oh, oh oh....so GOOD! GREAT! ! ! ! Ko-oonay shayraffknee, tahz sworraff ko-orzeh Keep up the AWESOME work! ! !

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