First Time Poem by Alison Smith

First Time

Rating: 4.9


She had never been this close
Her heart beat wildly
Even the thought of his touch
Made her quiver.

His hand wandered down her
He gently played with her breasts
She sought his mouth
They met in a kiss
Their tongues exploring.

She could feel her nipples hardening
He was so close to her, she could feel his warmth
She occasionally shivered, but it wasn't from cold
It was more from the anticipation of what was to come.
He guided to the bathroom
Where he had prepared a spa
Bubbles floated around
Two glasses of champagne sat at the side.
He looked into her eyes
And when he saw only love there
He gradually removed her clothes
Kissing and caressing as he did.

She removed his..
Gently touching and exploring him as she did
They then entered the water
Tasting the bubbles of champagne.

At first she felt awkward
Not sure of what to do
But he soon calmed her nerves
Kissing and caressing her.

He guided her hand to touch him
Instructed her on how she should move
Then his hand sought her love spot
And his fingers lingered there.

She soon became lost in the bliss
She could feel only excitement
Her hand gripped tighter
As her body began to soar.

His hand moved all over her
Caressing and exciting her more
He could feel his own feelings growing
He knew his desire was strong.

When he knew he could not take any more
He gently helped her out of the spa
They dried each other, an urgency in their actions
They moved as one to the bed.

He was burning now with desire
Her body only made him more so
She looked upon him and shivered
No longer a desire to resist..

He lay her upon the bed
And kissed her from head to toe
His tongue gently caressed her mound
Finding the entrance and going in

She moaned and arched as he entered....

Damm was that the alarm

NOOOOOOOO...... only a dream again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Declan McHenry 29 March 2007

A brave and vivid piece Alison. Difficult to do erotica in some ways yet you've managed it well here.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 April 2007

Wow... Alison things are heating up again down under...10

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Jim Foulk 05 April 2007

a great piece of well penned poetry.

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Original Unknown Girl 30 March 2007

Wow! What a great way to dream and if it wasn't real well what a pity! ! Wonderful romp of a poem! HG: -) xx

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David Harris 29 March 2007

Alison, they say it gets steamy when it is hot. It must be very hot down your way this week. I loved this piece especially the nice twist in the tail. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. Enjoyable read as always. David

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Anna Russell 29 March 2007

Quick, press snooze! Steamy write Alison, I really enjoyed this. Hugs Anna xxx

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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