Dreams Poem by Thampi KEE

Dreams

Rating: 4.5


some words for you to hum along
the sound so sweet and soft to sing

the soul of dear, may wandering through
the sandal world of silent woods,
not listening to summer breeze
staring at blue old sky of us

never ask this wind to sing
I wonder what they're thinking of
just thinking of, passing of our life
still looking for thy long lost love

I will ask the moon above to say
to bring you love, a night and a day
and a touch so sweet and a true warm
fun, I wish so warm again...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'May wandering through the sandal world of silent woods' Rachel Ann Butler

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Wahab Abdul 07 March 2012

WOW! LUCIDLY COMPOSED A LUCID POEM ON A UNIVERSAL THEME FOR THE HUMANITY.......THROUGH DREAM.

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Lawrence H 18 March 2012

what dreams you are trying to define? Metaphor or imagery?

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 04 August 2014

Nice lines..so well written...

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Akhtar Jawad 28 August 2014

I will ask the moon above to say to bring you love, a night and a day and a touch so sweet and a true warm fun, I wish so warm again... A nice write.

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The poem on love that dreams of the loved one's presence has catchingly been written.

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Queeny Gona 14 July 2016

A dream, so elegant in holding the readers to ponder on.

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Lovely lines that loaded with love!

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Simone Inez Harriman 15 November 2015

Beautiful poem Thampi. A peaceful, almost a serene lullaby of love and sweet dreams.....10

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Bharati Nayak 30 August 2015

Dream is where hearts sing and poems spring..It is our blissful land where all our desires fulfilled.Beautiful poem on dream.Thank you for sharing.- - -

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