* Crybaby Poem by Sonya Florentino

* Crybaby

Rating: 3.1


Does the weather make me suffer more than anyone

Was a dark cloud assigned to hound me

Does the rain fall heaviest on where I stand

Is the sun's ire directed straight at me


Was the cold wind told I must be followed

Was the snowstorm summoned to bury me

Is the weather really cruel or am I just a

crybaby! : (


© 2009 Sonya Florentino

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Magill 04 September 2009

amazing thought, great write, you do have a flair for symbolism

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Shashendra Amalshan 10 August 2009

I am in a way I am a cry baby too ma'am.. I mean when I start to whine and moan, I become a real pain to every one.. In fact, when I expressed a bitter xp through a poem people come and say my writing is good...some can't understand the emotions in my poems... And I should make the same comment too... I mean you do write good... poetry is something that is filled with emotions.. when write from your heart, more often than not you will come up with something good... writing is a good way to let your emotions out.. love shan

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Sandra Fowler 06 March 2009

It would seem that you have suffered from the effects of some very lowering weather. But I am sure that poetry will find you in every season. Excellent write, Warm regards, Sandra

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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