Crush Poem by Dan Brown

Crush

Rating: 3.5


My feelings overwhelm me. Like I’m in a vice being
Crushed. So strong, so real, but I know it is
Lust. Tears fall like ice being
Crushed. I can’t escape though I know I
Must. He turns, rejects me, leaves me
Crushed. Puts my heart on the shelf to gather
Dust. I did it again, I tried to push.
I pushed too hard, now I’ve lost my crush.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tracey Collins 22 August 2006

well writen....It`s hard to hold onto A crush.....I know I`ve been thier, but 10 years later I got him......

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Tracey Collins 22 August 2006

well writen....It`s hard to hold onto A crush.....I know I`ve been thier, but 10 years later I got him......

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Daniel Tyler 22 August 2006

you evoke the feelings of a crush very well here, well done.

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***** ********* 22 August 2006

oops Dan! lol I am just as bad when I have a crush too! lol I get possessive and crushed in the stampede to get away from me! rofl Sorry to laugh but we must! Grinning at your oh so broken sweet heart, Tai

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Dan Brown

Dan Brown

Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK
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