Crazy.. Poem by moon light

Crazy..



i think i m crazy
cos i miss u
though i try not to

cos i wait your msg
insted i know u wont read mine

cos i cant dropp a tear
while my heart is full of pain

cos i cant stop thinking of u
even u treat me bad

i m crazy
cos of u BABY...

wish time would pass by
fluently....

cos i cant breathe
whenever i saw u
with that girl!

wish my pain is over
sooner....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Moon light 26 December 2006

O well. kelly.. thanks u so much for real i m jus for fun and jus to shout out my feeling :) more i still learning and jus love poems but trying to write onli

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Kelly marie Berry 26 December 2006

it ok but a bit more thought would work. i had that problem with mine so i hope you take what i telling you and work on it as a poet said to me no one poem is truely ever done not even if you fell it your best. take care kelly

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