Cold Life Poem by Indira Renganathan

Cold Life

Rating: 5.0


Desire is fire, so too is lust
He says, he lost his heart in her love
Fire flies sport around in rounds
Unaware of their downfall in cold life

Tuesday, July 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 July 2018

A thought provoking poem. A succinct write yet so profound. Well crafted write.10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 July 2018

Desire is fire! Well said! A beautiful little poem dear madam! (10)

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yoonoos peerbocus 24 July 2018

desire//love/life/are interwoven in each other subject to the way they are reshuffled/or reset by fresh norms of seeing/all have been beautifully and poetically juxtaposed/and many conclusion can be drawn by each PH poet/reader

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 24 July 2018

A poem with a profound message. desire is fire. When desire turns to greed what will be that like? One can imagine. Very much thought provoking, indeed. Thanks for sharing. X

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2018

Desire is just like fore and this burns life. Sometimes desires bring downfall. But love is power to revive life. Cold life amazes mind entirely. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...10

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