Calling The Moon Poem by Pete Crowther

Calling The Moon

Rating: 4.3


The oyster, the mussel, and pearl
belong to the Moon, it is said,
and when she is gone, like a girl
who is lost, you can hear them cry,
oh, longingly from where they lie
in the sand of the soft sea bed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raynette Eitel 23 May 2005

This is lyrical and very nice. Raynette

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Patricia Gale 28 February 2006

I feel guilty to have pearl earings now. Very nice Patricia

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Anna Russell 22 February 2006

Silky and smooth. Loved it! Hugs Anna xxx

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Scarborough Gypsy 02 June 2005

I fell in love with your poetry the first time I ever read it and this is a perfect example of your wonderful skill and romantic ability with the craft. Gyp's

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Christine Austin Cole 29 May 2005

Oh! I like this... I most absolutely do. If I were to be terribly picky, I'd suggest a removal of the comma at the end of the third line. Comma or not, however - this is wonderful. ~Christine

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A. B. 25 May 2005

Peter, this is one of ur cool songs. Short and beautiful :)

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Pete Crowther

Pete Crowther

Hull, East Yorkshire, England
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