Buzzer Poem by chloe young

Buzzer

Rating: 5.0


sometimes i wish my brain was a buzzer
and when the bleakness penetrates it,
there would be a massive noise piercing
directly through my ear hole,
i could shiver and shake it off, the buzzer
could create a seizure of happiness
and i could glow.
or, maybe it would go off too
often and darkness would swarm me,
deafness would make me manic
but then at least there would be
a reason for how i am feeling.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subroto Chatterjee 15 August 2009

An interesting stimulus-response Pavlovian set-up....All one has to do is press the right button....Buzzzzzzzzz.....! ! ! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Shashendra Amalshan 11 August 2009

well this is a different one indeed, I mean modern, young poets do express themselves through all sorts of poetic techniques.. good.... cheers shan

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you got a different mind, good.

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could create a seizure of happiness and i could glow. rife with bitterness...

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