Borrowed Time? Poem by Shaye Michaelson

Borrowed Time?

Rating: 3.8


There was a time in recent past
When sunshine found a way to last,
When fear receded with the night,
To stand aside for hope's new light.
A quiet hour where time began
And symphony of daylight rang
Indeed, that time was warm and free,
Too bad then, it ran out on me...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue angel Florida 08 August 2007

Interesting play with time, a call to remember to enjoy to its fullest. Great piece!

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X Trane 17 August 2007

lovely, but you are still in the Carribean are you not? I hope the sun comes back into your life to stay. It could be worse, you could live in England god forbid.

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R H 13 August 2007

Beautiful flow and effortless rhymes abound in this sad and reflective write. jz

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Not a member No 4 08 August 2007

Economical, yet covers a lot of significant ground. Laden with loss, longing and regret. Very fine work. jim

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Sara Wiliams 08 August 2007

great pen, thanks for sharing.10 for me.

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Marvin Brato 08 August 2007

Time runs out from all... its a matter how we make the most of it that counts! Simply amazing! Thanks Shaye. worth the 10.

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