Blueberry Hill Poem by Rob Lamberton

Blueberry Hill

Rating: 5.0


Said she'd never climb another mountain
But said nothing bout a hill
Steep ascent so weary
Dull slope inviting thrill

Said she'd never wear the saddle
Never take another ride
But the pony was out grazing
And she liked the easy stride

Said she'd never cross the valley
Risk the precipice
Took the gully but a moment
For better or for worse

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 28 December 2022

A fantastic poem.....well written

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Rob Lamberton 28 December 2022

Thank you for your kind remarks dear poet!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 December 2022

I totally agree With Rose Marie it's beautiful

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Rob Lamberton 20 December 2022

Thank you so much! I'm glad you both like it!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 December 2022

A beautiful and well crafted poem adorned with compelling images.

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Rob Lamberton 20 December 2022

Correction: the marriage of words craft images…

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Rob Lamberton 20 December 2022

I like how the poetic seeing changes when looking at a poem from different angles and through other eyes!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 December 2022

Life itself has many wonders to offer that we could never stop our desire to explore. A beautiful adorned with compelling images.

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Rob Lamberton 20 December 2022

The marriage of words crafts images with depth seen by the perceptive eye!

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