Black Star Poem by Ashley Bachtel

Black Star

Rating: 4.2


Black Star, Black Star
I wish I'd know where you are.
I need a wish, to help me out
in my dark world full of doubt.

Black Star, Black Star
shining brighter than the rest,
You're hiding in your deep dark nest.
Come out to play, its safe I say
I need you, you're the only way.

Black Star, Black Star,
hiding away oh so deep.
Black Star, Black Star
watch me as I fall asleep...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Price 22 February 2012

Nicely done. I like the rhythm and the verbs until falling asleep. Paints a nice picture.

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Dave Walker 25 January 2012

A great poem, like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, An Angel Cries.

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