Beside You Poem by Tears In Rain

Beside You

Rating: 4.0


here I am again
as if I'd never gone
each memory clear
as yesterdays

you lay beside me
likening patience
listening to every tale
I have to tell

yet all my words
likening nothing
but a dream

it seems I am awakening
finding I was here
all along

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela Davison 12 September 2005

I like this very much, TIR. Short and to the point, without a lot of dribble. Not sure about the use of 'liken', though. Overall, a good read.

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Lylyanna Pilewski 07 September 2005

nice one i like it Lylyanna

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