Beautiful Poem by Samantha Williams

Beautiful

Rating: 4.0


Sprawling verdant green landscape
opening like an orchid before me.
The soft autumn sun tinting the
moutain sides with palest yellow.
The breeze washes over my skin
and soothes my aching senses.
As I drink in the colors and smells
I am aware of peace and accomplishment.
Each moment holds more discovery
and each discovery creates more wonder.
Yet the true beauty of the scene is not
held exclusively by the landscape.
Each discovery was shared and admired
together, each wonder seen in unison.
He stood beside me, and made that
moment beautiful

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gregory Gunn 03 June 2006

Yes, a rather delicious depiction of a beautiful moment, Samantha. Lovely choice of language. May I point out that verdant and exclusively are misspelled? Kindest regards, Greg

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Seán O' Muiriosa 28 May 2006

Simply a very beautiful poem of nature and love. Sincerely, Seán

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