At Night Poem by shiny shine

At Night

Rating: 4.0


Looking up at the sky I see a shooting star pass by
It makes me think of you and everything we have ever been through and how fast it all has gone by
Upon that shooting star I made a wish
Praying that we will always remain the same
Looking at you, talking to you
I see it’s true
I acknowledge that you truly care
You promise nothing will ever change
That you will be here besides me forever
You are here to stay
We both want to be in each other’s lives forever
And talking with you I know it’s true
But what do we do when that special someone comes between us
Of course I wish you the best of luck
Day after day you say you are here to hold me tight
I love you and care about you more than words can ever say
I want everything to be okay
Wish to be with you night and day
I will forever love you
No matter what you say or what you do
Know this will always be true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anonymous Heart 01 March 2010

Beautiful poem. The emotions in this are brought to life.

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Chase Breeden 07 January 2010

Very nice expression of your feelings. One can almost feel everything you're talking about

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That was a really great love poem. You expressed your feelings beautifully. I hope love like this can last in your heart forever, even as I find it hard to believe something could last forever.

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