All Alone Poem by sancheir lewis

All Alone

Rating: 4.7


Sitting all alone in a boxed room
looking at the walls locking in on me
looking like they are about to fall in and 'BOOM'
wondering what my life is going to be.
thinking to myself should i take that step out of the door
or maybe just sit here and cry for myself
'but what is there to life for' i should just lay here on this cold floor
i can't even call for help because i am all by myslef.: (

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
shehla carol 15 June 2005

THIS WAS UR BEST POEM DID A GREAT JOB

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Angela Hansard 04 September 2005

You are a going to be a fine young writer. Keep up the good job. The more you write the better you will get. Always look to God for guidence and that he will give you the words to write. Remember Jesus loves you and God does to. Also God answers prayers.

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Camacy Melville 29 August 2005

I really liked your poem, it flowed very nicely, keep writing, :)

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Lylyanna Pilewski 20 July 2005

wow this was awesome. Hey I'm 15 too! but I was born in 1990 I really like ur stuff great job please write more. Lylyanna

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heavy metal insanity 17 June 2005

Awsome poem I loved it!

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 15 June 2005

This is your best one yet! ! ! keep doing it!

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sancheir lewis

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