Something Special

These suicidal thought are running through my head.
I wish I was done, I wish I was dead.
These suicidal thoughts just wont go away.
I don’t want to live another miserable day.
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Tick tock goes the clock.
sound Embedded in my brain
winding down my horrid life
driving me insane! ! !
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When everything you do appears to fail
And family and friends cannot help you,
Believe in yourself and you will prevail.
Your hopes, your dreams, and beliefs become frail
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I see that you are mesmerized by what you see on the outside but…
I am more than my long hair, my pretty eyes, and my compelling smile
I am more than my full breast, my soft skin, and my slim waist
I am more than my full hips my, my thick thighs and my round behind
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Sunny days and pretty roses
No longer mean a thing
All my goals, my hopes, my wishes
Have vanished with my dreams.
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When everyone left me
You stayed by my side.
You wiped away my tears,
and told me not to cry.
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There once was this little boy who wanted a boat, but he had no money, so he decided to ask the Lord.
'Dear Lord, ' the boy said, 'will you please give me a boat.'
The Lord gave him nails.
'Dear Lord, ' the boy said, 'will you pretty please give me a boat.'
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Born from sin,
And raised from dirt.
I come to show
What I am worth.
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The once empty lot is now filled,
filled with death that once lived,
death that once lived a dreadfull life,
a dreadfull life that was filled with hate, misery, and pain.
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Oh lovely love, come and love me
Show me how real love should be
All of the feelings I have tangled inside
Show me that there is no reason to hide
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this a ghazal I had to write. Please tell me what you think of it.

Behind metal chains, lock, and wire,
I must escape; it’s down to the wire.
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So you say that our love has ran its course,
that you no longer want us to be together, and that you are moving on…
You’re leaving me the task of cleaning up all this blood that’s flowing from my heart,
and all these tears that steadily stream down my cheeks that you caused? !
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I see that you have moved on
From what we used to have
All of our treasured memories
Have become part of your past,
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You left me hurt and you didn't care
I thought you loved me & would always be there
but you stole my heart and tore it in two
and still I loved you enough to forgive you
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My bleeding eyes
come as no surprise
to those who do not know me
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The
Rains.
The Rains And I.
At Times We Are Loud,
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In my honors english class each student was asked to write a ghazal. This is my ghazal. Please comment it and tell me what you think of it.


The weight our hearts bare, is all but light.
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Sweet Love, Sweet Love, come and lie so tenderly.
Tell me that the way I love you,
is the same way you love me.
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Look at all the people you’ve passed
Because you thought that time would last
All of life’s simple things one day you’ll see
How very much they mean to you and to me
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You tell me all these things to make my day,
And then all of your promises go astray.
And yet if you told me the same things all over again
I would be stupid enough to believe you.
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