Samra Haq

Rookie - 27 Points [' Hope']

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Margaret Kiyaga (8/21/2014 10:46:00 AM)

    Samra Haq's poems are really good!

    4 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie Joseph Ziegrist (3/5/2014 12:24:00 PM)

    A nice poem. It reveals the orient spirit.

  • Rookie - 122 Points Abdul Malik Mandani (3/5/2014 10:30:00 AM)

    I don't very much care for this poem, pardon me. But the kite is not free, the string is in someone's hand. It can fly only as far as it is let to go. A kite needs wind, string and someone to fly. The poem is kind of childish. It has no substance.

  • Rookie Anne Havell (3/5/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    Samra, your strict rhyming scheme contrasts very nicely with the image of the kite as it flows freely through the air, I liked this very much. I feel there is still a little work to be done on some of the lines as they are a little clumsy in construction but it would be worth doing this.

  • Rookie Karen I Banks (4/16/2012 11:17:00 AM)

    put life on here i want to hear it thanks

  • Rookie Phyllis T. Halle (3/5/2012 2:26:00 PM)

    Samra: I enjoyed your poem To touch the Sky.
    Not every one feels the freedom to fly and touch the sky. You express your sense of freedom and clarity of purpose.
    Sincerely, Phyllis T. Halle

STAR

Twinkle star, twinkle star
You are up above so far
Always you twinkle like a diamond
Blazing so high and high above and brightened
At night you twinkle in many shapes
You are showing your lights in many phases
You have some catching and gravity
So everyone is admiring your beauty
In the dark moonlight we can see your charm

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