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Samra Haq


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  • Margaret Kiyaga (8/21/2014 10:46:00 AM)

    Samra Haq's poems are really good!

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  • Joseph Ziegrist (3/5/2014 12:24:00 PM)

    A nice poem. It reveals the orient spirit.

  • Abdul Malik Mandani (3/5/2014 10:30:00 AM)

    I don't very much care for this poem, pardon me. But the kite is not free, the string is in someone's hand. It can fly only as far as it is let to go. A kite needs wind, string and someone to fly. The poem is kind of childish. It has no substance.

  • Anne Havell (3/5/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    Samra, your strict rhyming scheme contrasts very nicely with the image of the kite as it flows freely through the air, I liked this very much. I feel there is still a little work to be done on some of the lines as they are a little clumsy in construction but it would be worth doing this.

  • Karen I Banks (4/16/2012 11:17:00 AM)

    put life on here i want to hear it thanks

  • Phyllis T. Halle (3/5/2012 2:26:00 PM)

    Samra: I enjoyed your poem To touch the Sky.
    Not every one feels the freedom to fly and touch the sky. You express your sense of freedom and clarity of purpose.
    Sincerely, Phyllis T. Halle

'You Can See The Sky'

The sky is so high
And you don't have wings to fly
You are intelligent and passionate
Try to be honest, never tell a lie
In order to reach up to your goals
Education is the best way to perform your roles
Education is the sign of the dignity
As it provides you so many moral values
You received an opportunity to reach your goals

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