this is Macy Dvirnak. your poetry is well written. poetry written from the heart is beeter than if it were imagined. For out of the fullness of the heart, the mouth speaks. Luke 6: 45
The unspoken murmurs
Cry Hard! Tears on your face, a remedy for the drought. Cry Hard! That it seems your body is turning inside out. Cry! Until every last drop of emotion is wrung out of you. Cry! Become undone... tears of fire, agony, & blue.