RUBAB ATWAL

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  • Bronze Star - 6,773 Points Ramesh Rai (1/31/2014 9:55:00 PM)

    Rubab Atwal is a great dynamic Poetess who has brought her position to explore an outstanding value of life. Wish her a bright future.

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  • Bronze Star - 6,773 Points Dilraj Sahota (1/8/2014 2:37:00 PM)

    Rubab, my dad showed me your poem page.
    You have an impressive vocabulary and your poems are very enjoyable to read. Me and dad read through them together last weekend. I especially like: Two Pieces, A Path, Wars. And Angel Among Us is a truly beautiful read. So keep up the good work!
    Be careful with some of your grammar though as you are getting the use of the words its and it's mixed up in your poems so perhaps run your poems through a grammar check program.
    Looking forward to reading more of your poems, please continue to Push the Limits :)

    Your Raju Chacha

  • Veteran Poet - 3,093 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/17/2013 4:50:00 AM)

    RUBAB ATWAL is the young, aspiring and gifted poet.
    Comes with beautiful poems.
    Her themes are much higher than her age.
    No doubt she will rise to the popular poets level.
    Wishing you all the Best and Success in her all future endeavours.
    Keep on exploring the amazing gift you are blessed with.
    God Bless you!

  • Freshman - 1,028 Points Dinesh Nair (12/6/2013 5:57:00 AM)

    RUBAB ATWAL is a budding poet with immense talent and as a poet with many more interesting tales to tell she is likely to be very popular in the P.H soon. The apt diction used in her poems and the emotional bond she seems to have with her immediate friends around her are her areas of strength and it is hoped that in due course of time she will be graduated into poet for whom vision of an invariably wider world will be an inevitably desired merit.
    I wish Baby Rubab Atwal a very great time ahead as a poet par excellence.

The Waters Of Heart

A river unknown flows
in every human heart
moving through highs and lows
setting all obstacles apart
and nobody knows, so still it flows
that any river is there
and yet the mankind's drought of life
is daily fulfilled here.
Blossom of secrets and hopeful fishes

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