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Alone - Poem by shakil ahmed

Alone, alone, alone
I was all alone
I was alone in my mother’s womb
I will be alone in my grave beneath the tomb
My life was a lone journey
There was none to accompany
She chose me as companion
I promised not to abandon
They say it was a heavenly knot,
Many battles of life together we fought
Suddenly a gushing wind blowing over the land
Swept her away who was my only friend
I was like a mate less dove
Wandering to and fro hankering love
Living in this mundane world
I love someone who is in another world
No man can give life to a dead one
It is only I who can make a dead alive
When in my couch I lie
She comes in my vision
She speaks, she loves, she atones…
I feel her love, touch her fragrant Jones,
I quench my thirst of hungry heart
With a girl who is fallen apart
For some times she remains alive
With a woeful heart my love I give
Again, I become alone when I awake
My lone journey again I take
In the midst of millions I become alone
It is fated that for no reasons I atone.

Comments about Alone by shakil ahmed

  • Gold Star - 7,329 Points Brian Johnston (11/14/2015 2:26:00 PM)

    Well this is the first poem I've read of yours Shakil and while your feelings of loneliness are poignant, I do hope that you are moving on in your life. The poem does lack a kind of musicality though, a rhythm, that one other noticed too. One of my goals in writing poetry is to try to make the poem sound conversational as well so that the rhymes do not stand out so strongly. A line like Many battles of life together we fought is a non natural arrangement of a sentence just to make it easier for you to rhyme. I think your poem would be better if you tried to avoid such constructions.

    I would also advise you to perhaps spend more time resting with your poem before releasing it. It is tempting to publish sometimes to early because we get caught up in the emotion of our own work. This poem show signs of being near to a first draft. When I finish the first draft of a poem, I call it the 'Gift of the muse and do not really consider to be my own poem until I have rewritten most of it. You will be amazed I think at how much better a poem will be if you force yourself to rewrite with a a regular rhyme scheme and use a rhythm that stays through the whole poem. These disciples are a great aid as well in helping you to think about different and perhaps better ways of saying the same thing!

    in any case, please keep writing. You definitely show talent. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,881 Points Gerry Legister (11/14/2015 11:37:00 AM)

    I love the first stanza, I will be alone in my grave...excellent work (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 867 Points Domes Wau (11/12/2015 9:07:00 AM)

    I am speechless how great you wrote a nice expression of this poem. I like it and thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poems About Alone

  1. 51. Alone , shakil ahmed
  2. 52. Lara. A Tale , George Gordon Byron
  3. 53. Alone , Abdul Wahab
  4. 54. The Nut-Brown Maid , Anonymous
  5. 55. Cold Dark Room , sandy nobody
  6. 56. Alone , Mark R Slaughter
  7. 57. The Loves Of The Angels , Thomas Moore
  8. 58. Alone With My Thoughts , Les Farrow
  9. 59. Alone , Bob Gibson
  10. 60. ** Alone , Nikki Addleton
  11. 61. The Flower By The Path , Augusta Davies Webster
  12. 62. The Nut-Brown Maid. A Poem. , Matthew Prior
  13. 63. Alone , anees akbar
  14. 64. Alone , James Fumich
  15. 65. Being Alone , JAPCHAE Wyeth
  16. 66. I'M So Alone , Emo Seb
  17. 67. Give Your Heart To The Hawks , Robinson Jeffers
  18. 68. Alone , Lesa MRK
  19. 69. Let Us Alone , Charles Mackay
  20. 70. Alone , Dama Tristeza
  21. 71. Alone , Doris Johnson
  22. 72. Serenade , James Russell Lowell
  23. 73. (song Lyric 3) Sitting At The Edge Of T.. , Christopher McInnes
  24. 74. Alone , Moon beam
  25. 75. Tonight , Neela Nath Das
  26. 76. The Odyssey , Homer
  27. 77. The Nut-Brown Maid , Anonymous Olde English
  28. 78. Alone Forever , Stacy Bea
  29. 79. The Not-Browne Mayd , Anonymous Olde English
  30. 80. A Conversation With God , (brief renderings) Joe Fazio
  31. 81. Carric-Thura , James Macpherson
  32. 82. Alone? , mikeey stagg
  33. 83. Alone With You I Want To Be , josee dube
  34. 84. Alone.. , macaulay akinbami
  35. 85. Alone With You , Aldo Kraas
  36. 86. Lost And Alone , Marilee Morley
  37. 87. A Misery , Amitava Sur
  38. 88. Alone Iam Alone In Alone Island , Mohammed AlBalushi
  39. 89. My Man's Poor Mind (Or) How Much Doe.. , Leah Ayliffe
  40. 90. Alone With You , Mary Lyle
  41. 91. '' Alone Tonight'' , James Branson
  42. 92. Ding-A-Ling! Dingdong Bell! Singalong, '.. , Harindhar Reddy
  43. 93. Ph: Echo: Alone Too , Brian Johnston
  44. 94. Thine Alone , Joanna Kantharia
  45. 95. Please Leave Me Alone , Raj Arumugam
  46. 96. The Wolf , chris urbaez
  47. 97. I Stand An Alone , TERRY ANDERSON
  48. 98. Being Alone In This World , MOHAMMAD SKATI
  49. 99. Alone, Together , Stacy Bea
  50. 100. The Real Discrimination.. , veeraiyah subbulakshmi
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