Your Wild Flower Of Mountain Poem by Cristina Teodor

Your Wild Flower Of Mountain

Rating: 4.3


Once upon a time was a wild flower,
Living in the mountains nearest sky and stars,
Other side of world was a young man living,
Seeking for the happiness of his life.

He was searching a wild flower,
A masterpiece of nature that fearless grew up,
A unique flower that lives lonely,
In a cold fresh breeze of mountain wind.

Seeking and seeking, finally you found her,
After a hard climbing on the rocks,
She was up on the peak of mountain,
In a wild rocky place.

You were astonished by her beauty,
You couldn't stop to stare at her,
She showed to you like an actress,
After curtains get opened on the stage.

She looked so strong to you, so pretty,
But also so charming and so delicate,
She knew you'll come and care for her,
All her life she was waiting for you.

Was enough only her petals to touch,
And she blossomed like a glowing smile,
Your face became so thrill and happy,
She was everything you ever wanted.

But hurry up, time is running,
Unfortunatelly never stops,
You have such precious moments with your wild flower to spend,
You waited for her so long and life never waits.

You took your gracious wild flower,
And nurtured her with love and faith,
Even you knew will last only a moment,
You gave her moments that she'll never forget.

But day to say good bye has come,
Sitting in your arms she closed her eyes and passed away,
Your face was last thing she wanted to see,
Before she got the last breath passing to eternity.

Don't waste your time, be with your loved one,
She is so special and so worthy in this shortless life,
Give to your wild flower of mountain your great love,
Don't wait for destiny from you to steal it.

Saturday, November 12, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,love and loss,mountain,romantic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 25 November 2011

Oh this poem is precious :) the way you reveal the curtain of the show, the first line it was amazing to read and end the show perfectly...the show was great, a great show by flower n the hunter :) I like this very much, the emotion such a real thing :) what a good theater hahahahaa joking :) Nice idea, wild flower is not wild as the name given..it good as you described, with a happy journey :) _Unwritten Soul

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Shadow Girl 25 November 2011

wow..this is a truly beautiful poem...made my heart warm.....i agree with what you say....and the way you expressed it..the imagery used was just beautiful -SG

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Good story, rendered poetically

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Howard Savage 07 February 2016

This is a great poem with strong metaphors. Keep writing. Strong Emotions.

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Howard Savage 05 January 2016

Once upon a time is a great way to start a poem. Good job.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 28 December 2011

Oh my God. This is beautiful. This poem has made my day.

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Vipins Puthooran 02 December 2011

I like the story and climax of this poem! ! ! ! Thou drew a beautiful picture here with your quill: : : Magnificient write! ! ! VIPINS

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