Your Touch (Unfinished) Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

Your Touch (Unfinished)

Rating: 5.0


Your touch is so deep
A gentle hurt when you pass through
Holding very tight when it sink in
It tastes so sweet in giving and taking vibrantly

Like a facade of a cave with mild droplets
Careful digs on a grassy and marshy flower
Like a bee that sips the inner core of a pollen
Smooth flowing on a center tip at the triangle mirror

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vilma Gomez 04 May 2014

a poem with sensitivity and intelligence. I love the wordings. GREAT

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Henry Garcia 08 May 2015

Wow! ! ! Wonderful and superb

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Kirti Sharma 16 June 2014

Nice poem! ! I like it!

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Helena Zen 06 May 2014

....Greatly done... Thumbs UP

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Anne Mayz 05 May 2014

...a wonderful and unique write. Nicely done

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Mae Navales 04 May 2014

WOW..8 lines with full of romance and passion. I am dearly love and like this poem

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