The splendor of a sunset that energizes my emotions
The radiance of a rose that refreshes the core of my being
The tranquil tenderness of a dazzling dancing dripping dew drop
The pure magnificence of the midnight moon massaging my mood
The lifter of my spirit and the healer of my hurting heart
Greater than gravity, more majestic than the morning -your smile
I love it.. Filled with that which makes you want to read more. Good one there
How I could read these incredible words, every single day! Truly amazing Howard. As Allotey has said...'Filled with that which makes you want to read more.....
Brilliant write with inspired lines that soar with wings of the beauty of your words!
Sunset or sunrise it does not matter sun smiles and we smile continuously. Tender love brings smile for us. Love is like greater gravity and this motivates us. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10
Smile majestically and artistically motivates mind. Greater than gravity, this gives goodness and splendor in life. Love sprinkles fragrance like rose. Beautifully penned poem is shared here is interesting.10
The splendor of the poem and the beautiful comments just hold my breath.Thanks to poet and commentators.
Beautiful, beautiful. I can imagine how beautiful that smile must be because you have described it in amazing imagery. Dazzling dancing dripping dew drop...awesome.
A smile can heal another's heart when shared in passing. Great imagery throughout your poem enhancing it's meaning. Great poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Superb imagescaping, and magnificent metaphoric play, Howard...Last line the best...And if I could be so bold as to make 1 grammatical suggestion on this pen-gem...A comma in between gravity and more....PERFECTION! ~FjR~
Much thanks. I did add the comma!