Your Silence Poem by ramesh rai

Your Silence

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Your silence makes me awaken
to the twilight of hammering thought
oozes for pageantry melody
like the descending sun reaches horizone
for somewhat there is to say
riddles all satire of my life.

Being incredulous I sniff your mounting thoughts
to lay me abroad in desert island
where you planted the seed of wild flower
for me, in the lonely island
I snog the fragrance of thee
and cheers all pleasantry rhymes.

Your silence is making tremendous noise
asking for awakening of my soul.

Thursday, August 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 26 August 2014

The silence of the other, it seems, is pregnant with meaning creating in you hammering thoughts and taking you to a solitary island where she has planted a wild flower for you whose fragrance is so inviting! The poem has a soft air of romance and the sheltered island is going to be the meeting place of the lovers! A very imaginative write! Enjoyed!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 August 2014

Silence is the most powerful tool as Mahatma Gandhi showed. Beautiful message delivered through the poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 August 2014

Thoughtful flow of words. Silence speaks more than words and it speaks louder than any voice. it is also true it goes deep into ones heart too. May be that's why we hear Silence is golden. Lovely poem. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 August 2014

Sometimes silence is more powerful than speaking, it shakes our hearts and soul. A thoughtful poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 21 August 2014

silence and tremendous noise, I like it, thanks

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