Your Ride Poem by Kathie Donaldson

Your Ride

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A red pickup passes.
My heart skips a beat or two.
For just a fleeting moment
I wonder if it's you.
How long will this feeling last?
When will it subside?
Why do I still look for you?
I know that you died.
Your truck seemed like a part of you.
You drove it with such pride.
I believe I'll never stop.
I'll look for you inside.
It will always be your ride.
When a red pickup passes
My heart will skip a beat or two.
For just a fleeting moment
I'll wonder if it's you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sugar Bear 14 June 2007

Oh My Gosh... This write really brings tears to my eyes. I'm so sorry of your loss. My boyfriend drives a red pickup, now I'll be thinking about this forever! I'm so sorry again. It was a very beautiful write. It would sound wonderful sung. Maybe you should sing it. Reminds me of 'Cats in the Cradle'

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Ted Sheridan 13 June 2007

Your son is safe now and I am sure he is looking out for his mother.....very nice poem.

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Kathie Donaldson 13 June 2007

This poem is written in memory of my son, Korey who died November 21,2005.He drove a 94 Chevy pickup.

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