Your Presence Poem by Suelynn Walters

Your Presence



THIS gloomy room I dwell
As I sit here I feel something in the air
Ignore I do but it over powers me I know
A cold feeling, the smell of flowers
I feel your there
I turn to look and there's nothing behind me
But I know somehow this can't be true
Your shadow passes fast and cleverly
Your presence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charles Jagongo Ogola 02 May 2016

Hmmmm, sweet and good choice of words in this poem. Keep it up Sue.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 10 May 2015

Great Job keep it up

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 02 October 2013

A beautiful poem, written in classical poetry, The lingering presence of someone.

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 October 2013

very nice. a sweet ink.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 02 October 2013

Lovely poem, written in a classical poetry, a beautiful write.

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Suelynn Walters

Suelynn Walters

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