Suelynn Walters

Rookie - 293 Points (U.S.A.)

Your Presence - Poem by Suelynn Walters

THIS gloomy room I dwell
As I sit here I feel something in the air
Ignore I do but it over powers me I know
A cold feeling, the smell of flowers
I feel your there
I turn to look and there's nothing behind me
But I know somehow this can't be true
Your shadow passes fast and cleverly
Your presence

Comments about Your Presence by Suelynn Walters

  • Rookie - 391 Points Charles Jagongo Ogola (5/10/2015 10:45:00 AM)

    Great Job keep it up (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,479 Points Jesus James Llorico (10/2/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, written in classical poetry,
    The lingering presence of someone. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,659 Points Tiku . (10/2/2013 7:15:00 AM)

    very nice. a sweet ink. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,479 Points Jesus James Llorico (10/2/2013 7:10:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, written in a classical poetry,
    a beautiful write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 2, 2013

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