Your Peak Poem by Floy Dy Ra Aka Floyd Floydson

Your Peak

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Just did a poem - typed it in
found a way to say
a new thought was brought
to you - under my skin
something like climbing up a peak
is like playing with yourself
hide and seek.

So many guys enter the highest tops
but in real life they are hating their jobs
so they step on the mountain highs
finding out there is no place to stay longer
after they cry stronger and asking why
it´s only a moment in life
and many die and others survive.

But afterwards another peak came
nevertheless it was not the same
but to be alone on top and reach the dream
was a vision but at the end an untrue realm
like an imaginary illusion
just good for the view
but without a conclusion just to see you
like I forgot to save my words in the net
nobody will have heard me and all was to forget.

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Floy Dy Ra,07-04-2013

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Floy Dy Ra, July 04/2013
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Gajanan Mishra 04 July 2013

words are truth, needless words are violation of truth. good write. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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