Your Mistake Poem by Steven Pimentel

Your Mistake

Rating: 3.5


You was the Mistake I got Into
The Trap I fell Into
but if it wasn't True Love
I wouldn't gotten Into YOU.

I heard all the Warnings
Some of my Friends told Me

but when your that in Love
is like your Heart Opens
& your Ears start Closing.

I Wish you would of hold Me
cause even when I held You
some how you still Slipped AWAY.

but that was Your Mistake.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My Poetry comes from My History with Women.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bastianus Nostrodamus 15 May 2012

You write from your hear, . Beatifull.

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Kevin Patrick 15 May 2012

We are not the same persons this year as last; nor are those we love. It is a happy chance if we, changing, continue to love a changed person. W. Somerset Maugham Nice work

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Kevin Patrick 15 May 2012

We are not the same persons this year as last; nor are those we love. It is a happy chance if we, changing, continue to love a changed person. W. Somerset Maugham Nice Work

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Daniel Kuetsinya 15 May 2012

Good one there. Take note of the advice of your friend below and it will do you more good than harm, thank you

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Jessica Dangerfield 17 May 2012

this poem is awesome

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David Dale Kush 28 August 2019

Good write written from the heart not a text box never change your style

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Brian Jani 15 June 2014

Yah this is good poetry

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Justin Reamer 03 August 2012

It is a rather sad poem. I can feel your pain. I hope you are doing okay, but this is a phenomenal poem. Good job.

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Marissa Ford 17 July 2012

tear jerker, so much emotion i love it! !

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Allan Macli Borges 18 June 2012

mistakes are the footprints of lovers. we're gonna learn that. nice poem.

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