Your Love Is A Dark But Wonderful Place Poem by Mikael Hansson

Your Love Is A Dark But Wonderful Place

Rating: 4.3


Being with you hurts so bad
But I can’t live without you
You are toxic to me
But you feel so good
But it hurts so bad

I want to stop loving you
But the heart wants you
But I can’t stand you
You turn my world upside down

Will you take me to paradise tomorrow
Or take me to hell
This ride is to intense for me
But I’m to scared to leave
Tomorrow might be a better day

I live for those moments
Where I see the spark in your eyes
When you’re good then you’re perfect
When you’re bad you are a nightmare

But now your eyes looks empty
Will you explode next
Is this as deep as this cycle goes
Will you be wonderful tomorrow
Will you glow tomorrow

You are like a brick of soap
The harder I try to catch you
The faster you slide out of my hands
Will you slide out for good

Tuesday, September 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This story is about an impossible love, I know she is bad for me, she is turning my life upside down, but my heart wants her. Her past is haunting her, but overlooking that she is the most beuatiful person I ever meet.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 12 December 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Mikael. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 09 September 2015

A lovely depiction of nightmare in infatuation's phoney bed, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Lust is the vain exultation of sensuality and an additive agony. On the other hand, love is a spiritual experience - a voyage of bliss. Thanks for sharing Mikael. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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Kelly Kurt 02 September 2015

I had a love like this, Mikael. Tortuous! Very well written! ! Thank you Peace

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Mikael Hansson 02 September 2015

Thank you for your comment! I'm very curious, what happened with you love? Did you end up walking away? I have walked away twice, but I'm keep coming back. She doesn't even realize what she is doing.

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Aileen Figueroa 01 September 2015

I so enjoy your poem. It starts out serous, but then again it's also funny. I live for those moments my Where I see the spark in your eyes When you’re good then you’re perfect When you’re bad you are a nightmare I laugh out loud in this part. Good sense humor

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Mikael Hansson 02 September 2015

Thank you for appreciate it :) Thanks for commenting! :)

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