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Musa Ndhlovu

(1994 April 04 / SOUTH AFRICA MPUMALANGA)

Your Look


The look I see
Is the look I feel,
The touch I feel
Is the touch I see.

The banana I eat
Is the banana I kiss,
The sun that rise on the easter
Is the sun that rest on my shoulder.

Oh, round moon
Why are you so comfy?
Oh, my day light hour
Why are you so sweaty?
Oh, my day night hour
Why are you so sweet?

Submitted: Wednesday, September 05, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, September 05, 2012

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I wrote this poem while I was thinking about the one I love. The way she is and the things she dose.

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