Unwritten Soul


Your Hello


Lost In the crowd
Never i would find way home
Foot stepped on its prints
Random marks on the sands
Heading straight to nowhere
Till then i am here, i am here
That finally found my road
I am here now, i am here

If you know what led me a way
By when I heard a sound
A sound from your heart
The honest guard

Among the voices
Yours the warmest
In silence, you calm me most
With the sound like borrowed from heaven
Could be your heart plays miracle to my ears
A sweet lullaby, indestructible in time
Echoes in my mind and reach my soul
Play me again your sweet simple Hello,
I may fall deeper than any valley
In a grace of your soul beauty

Broken in half part of my way
Surrender oh i am, for you to embrace
If anything i need you for more
Is only listening your hello
Encircle around your smiles
A perfect step to a higher place
For a hope, for another day still there

When honest cant buy by money
Embrace your words more than all golds
Blessed, glad face to see the truth in your soul
We all will feel that it is a gift from almighty God
For Him send a hand for my soul to reach home
I've got to feel the reality in a simple smile
Just only by a simple smile
With precious hello
And yours,
Not less than an initial glory
Better Than the Alpheus of beauties
For they have an eternal definition
To have place in my heart
As I see them on your lips
Delivering Hello and smiles

Comfy voice, silky touch, your mind
Just beautiful smile and mesmerizing words
Delivering my soul with another million smiles
When your heart isn't far from me than a mile
Feel in your chest, feel it if you can
Stand here, to be together
Just don't wait to share that love, spread it,
Freedom will shout it louder than the alto
Amusing the sleepy people in awaking time
In every sweet lullaby, peaceful lines
Give existence to the slept humanity by that simple smile.
A simple hello, with my honest smile

Submitted: Wednesday, February 20, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, February 20, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is my another collaboration work, and it was with Ellias, my dear friend, the poem that we have done actually just a poem that we want to voice for a thing, say Hello to everyone by a smile and nice gestures, nothing mean but if we know how important cheering people with hellos and spark their life with smile, it nice to them also great as it return to us...as hello is mean nothing just for goodness only, it may calm rocky heart and soften the worry mind outside....we should care others even we dont know them because life is love, drop any self center and center to whole souls, among us maybe people need help and maybe someday it will be our turn, even not much we can lend but a hello in smile it may help them a lil...and remember our life is not just for ourselves but people around that live our days_SOul

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  • Veteran Poet - 4,874 Points Frank James Davis (4/9/2013 11:50:00 AM)

    The loving warmth and sincerely helpful intent of your work makes you more than a great poet, Soul; you are, clearly, a very good person.
    I am privileged to know you- even, if only virtually.
    Your Hello is inspiring poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,874 Points Maria C. Costa (3/6/2013 8:06:00 PM)

    This lovely poem encompasses beautiful, lofty thoughts and feelings touching every soul. A Hello along with a smile are the perfect combination to bring joy and happiness around us.
    Let me dedicate to you, your dear friend and the whole community my poem Smile :)

    All the best,
    Maria (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,536 Points Lyn Paul (3/2/2013 5:55:00 AM)

    Beautifully written, More people should realise the importance of Your Hello. Great work. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,860 Points Neela Nath (2/27/2013 8:45:00 PM)

    Soul, it's very nice to think of others' happiness. we aren't here in this world for us only. we are for each other. A beautiful work. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,860 Points Neela Nath (2/27/2013 8:44:00 PM)

    Soul, it's very nice to think of others' happiness. we aren't here in this world for us only. we are for each other. A beautiful work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 909 Points Anthony Di''anno (2/27/2013 1:12:00 PM)

    Very nicely written Unwritten soul. I make a point of smiling and saying hello to everyone I meet. I am often saddened by the look of suspicion and fear I receive in return. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 717 Points Thomas A Robinson (2/27/2013 12:15:00 PM)

    For your smile the waves crest but never fall
    for you smile the moon pales behind thee
    When you smile my heart become peace
    when you smile happy is there for all
    If you smile the sun will rise in grin
    if you smile the seagulls soar high over the ocean
    Why you smile because you caught a glimpse of me
    why you smile because your soul is from eternity. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,073 Points Valerie Dohren (2/23/2013 1:48:00 PM)

    A smile and ahello can make all the difference to someone's day - we should all do it more often and adopt this wonderful philosophy. A lovely poem Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,073 Points Nader Baheri (2/23/2013 5:10:00 AM)

    Hello soul and Ellias \.you can imagine my honest smile through this masterpiece of humanity simultaneously.
    wow i have not thought like this before but now i am thinking you are absolutely right.the humanity will be spread by a simple smile.to the shereded hearts even if we can not give anything to warm them atleast we can give our smile.then how life would be happier and lovable than before.
    oh i like the way you compare it with Alto.
    this is so great i love the effect on my heart.thank you~nb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Ellias Aghili (2/21/2013 6:19:00 AM)

    Hello soul and hello to the world. hello to the every one that is just looking for a simple laugh and sympathy.
    thanks soul.
    We all think about the daily things, we all need honestly, we all need something more that the current things, more that current lies, we need no prides in this world. we are going to make a perfect world here in Poem hunter. a world that should be out of here. with our words, with our true honest feeling and also with a simple hello and a lovely smile we can make that world. Friends all over the world should be exist. as it is going to be exist. as true hearts are exist.
    It's a hope and will for all of us to see that a world a day. a day soon and near
    Ellias. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,475 Points Diane Hine (2/21/2013 5:37:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem to help us appreciate the really important things in life. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,443 Points * Sunprincess * (2/20/2013 7:31:00 AM)

    Dear soul, this is one of the most beautiful pieces you have written, and a nice collaboration with Ellias. You are right, just saying hello and giving a smile can brighten anyone's day. Because we do not know what the other person is going through in their life. Thanks for writing this and sure I love this one, it is fabulous! (Report) Reply

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