Your Eyes Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Your Eyes

Rating: 4.8


Grand rivers
Of honey and milk
Gentle breeze
So soft as silk
Beautiful idols
Wherever you think
Whatever you want
To eat, to drink
No one feels pain or grief
I tell all things in brief
My love!
I don't want your paradise
I just want to burn in your eyes

(2008/2/12)

Tuesday, February 12, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
BEAU GOLDEN 12 February 2008

Adding this to my favorites! I like it better than my 'why do i love you' Beau

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... ... 12 February 2008

All I can say is... *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhh* What a poem! It makes me feel like I want to fall in love again. Beautiful! Tu rosa.

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good bye 13 February 2008

beautiful write, thanks for sharing

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Tissa Calvert 25 September 2008

very nice and meaningful

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Ershad Mazumder 03 October 2008

From today I am with your theme and style.

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'I just want to burn in your eyes' Rachel Ann Butler

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Shabre Moore 22 January 2009

now thats usmthing ther i would tell my boyfriend now thats jus beautiful i really do love it alot dead serious its really lovely i loveit alot

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Subbaraman N V 29 November 2008

A nice write! Let us love all, serve all! Let us help ever and hurt never!

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Leon & Sarah Harris 18 October 2008

great write my friend!

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Tj Becker 17 October 2008

Another sweet gentle write. Your poems are relaxing and give the reader a feeling of relaxation and warmth.

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