Your Eyes! Poem by SALINI NAIR

Your Eyes!

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My form is not prolific
My form is not abundant
My form is not an enigma
My form is not charismatic
But a petal that fall behind

My anguish blend with shadows
My whisper pert and gigantic
My grieves shadow the future
Benevolent thought that phi antic
Empty life that is lunatic

Nature grin in front on a cart
Wonder glimpse in small eyes of mine
On a little cart eternal
Praise the boon that part me on earth
With the widen eyes of sorrows

A thunder hit inside and stoops all thought
If she grieve for a lazy lot
What would be the future of this trot?
Widen eyes that blink in shock
But she grins with all flock! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Thursday, October 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 31 October 2014

Very insightful and scripted with wonderful feelings and lines for the Nature.........amazing piece

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Heather Wilkins 30 October 2014

widen eyes that blink in shock but she grins with all flock nice writing

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 November 2014

Nice- wonderful- A thunder hit inside and stoops all thought If she grieve for a lazy lot What would be the future of this trot? Widen eyes that blink in shock But she grins with all flock

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 09 November 2014

On a little cart eternal Praise the boon that part me on earth With the widen eyes of sorrows A poem of eyes with sorrow after going through the realities of life and then a courage to reconcile with the surroundings. A beautiful poem. I enjoyed it. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Valsa George 04 November 2014

Widen eyes that blink in shock But she grins with all flock! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Though she is shocked by the grim realities of life, she smiles with the rest, covering up her grief! Great write!

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Akhtar Jawad 02 November 2014

It seems to be a self educating poem...................10 A thunder hit inside and stoops all thought If she grieve for a lazy lot What would be the future of this trot? Widen eyes that blink in shock But she grins with all flock! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 October 2014

Beautiful write Salini with fantastic lines..... Widen eyes that blink in shock But she grins with all flock! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I loved the way you presented it. Loved it.

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