Your Choice, But Why? Poem by Rodney vali

Your Choice, But Why?

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A choice,
we don't understand.
It's your choice,
we won't understand.

You were here with us,
but suddenly your gone.
You did what you did,
but why is a mystery.
Left the earth without notice,
leaving us alone,
leaving us in pain.

A choice,
we don't understand.
It's your choice,
we can't understand.
We'll miss you,
I'll miss you.
It was your choice,
but why?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
You guys need to know something to understand this poem better. I wrote this poem to express my feelings, that's why I wrote my other poems too. This poem was harder for me to write, though. Why? Because of the reason I wrote this poem. I wrote this poem because of the death of my mother's uncle. I knew him very well, he was only 62, and he was one of my most loved family members. The way he died is why I wrote: 'Your choice, but why? '. It was his choice, because he committed suicide. Some people go and cry for a few days after the death of a loved one, but I can't do that. The way I express my feelings is the following way: I get really quiet and just start writing. Now you guys know why I wrote this poem I hope you also understand the poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 September 2014

Suicide is the saddest choice. A nice poem but sadening. Do pls review my latest poem too.

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Farah Ilyas 09 June 2012

We'll miss you, I'll miss you. It was your choice, but why? these lines shoe your love & affection for your uncle, he will stay in your heart forever... where as poetry is concern you are bestowed with such supremacy in such little age, keep writing

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Vera Zandvliet 08 June 2012

Love your work [3 This one is another pretty one, with even more feeling in it. I also used to express my feelings like that.

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Tammie Aimson 05 June 2012

I think this is a great peom, nicely done xx

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