Your Beauty Holds My Eyes Poem by Marrs L'amoureux

Your Beauty Holds My Eyes

Rating: 4.9


Votre beaut'e est ce qui tient non oeil.

Your beauty is what holds my eye,
so hard to look away.
I am caught by the surprise,
of nothing more to say.
Short of breath and chilled of flesh,
I dropp to bended knee.
And promise all the world to you,
with love so tenderly.
I find so hard simple words to speak,
my joy I cant conceal.
Votre beaut'e est ce qui tient non oeil.

Your beauty is what holds my eye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 09 November 2008

Short of breath and chilled of flesh, I dropp to bended knee. I like those lines. good job. this is very cute. Becca.

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Greenwolfe 1962 04 September 2008

I gave this a 9 because it goes right to the heart of human attractivenss. Very, very well expressed. GW62

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